Haven't written poetry in quite some time, but here goes...

[Spook]

I've been more accustomed to writing articles than poetry, but during the last few minutes I gave poetry a shot. It has no rhyme or reason really....mostly just thoughts that came out with no rhyme whatsoever.

In Your Eyes

In my own deserted mind
my thoughts are fleeting
your spirit is haunting.

My senses beguile me,
it is beyond me;
nothing makes sense anymore.
If God is alive and well,
will He let me be in your eyes?

I'm lost in this well
I'm lost in this thirst,
I'm lost in this hunger.
Whatever sweet salvation this is,
it doesn't make sense to me.

I linger forever and your breath is all I need to feel against me.

Is heaven in your eyes?

If God is alive and well?
Will he let me be in your eyes too?

I'm lost in a well of emptiness,
I'm lost in a thirst,
I'm lost in a hunger for love.
Whatever sweet salvation there is,
please let me be in your eyes.

[hanuri]

Spoook! Poetry? Never allow...and stuff. Sorry I´m too stupid to get any poems.Anyway you know why I posted...

[Pammie]

Spook that's pretty good..

I like this line.

"I linger forever and your breath is all I need to feel against me."

[Pammie]

Originally Posted by hanuri

Spoook! Poetry? Never allow...and stuff. Sorry I´m too stupid to get any poems.Anyway you know why I posted...

Hanuri don't feel bad.. Poetry.. It's kind of hard to understand anyway..
:bigsmile

[unforgiven]

Wow Spook, that's touching. Wanna go stay on a mountain with me.

[Mr.X]

bro lay off the boooooze

[Puddles]

That was very touching, Spook. You should continue creating more poetry. For every emotion you shared, there are thousands of others who share the same emotions and would appreciate your words.

Roses are red
Violets are blue
eggs
bread
milk

[Puddles]

Originally Posted by boogt

Roses are red
Violets are blue
eggs
bread
milk

I like that. It's a simple reminder for you guys to pick up flowers every time you go to the supermarket! You should get that put on keychains or something.

my keychain reads "keys I havent lost yet" which are now lost