Rate my resume

[Opi]

Theres a job fair at my school this Saturday and this is what I put together, sans the pasted text, it's actually formatted nicely haha.

JOSHUA M. WITMER
*address and phone number here* Josh4285@Gmail.com

OBJECTIVE
Seeking a challenging and rewarding career in the trucking industry to apply work ethic and education
EXPERIENCE
1/07 – 12/07 Domino’s Pizza Allentown, PA
Assistant Manager
 Ensured that store hits labor goals and food costs
 Maintained correct inventory levels
 Managed crew of 18 employees
12/05 – 12/06 APS Wireless Whitehall, PA
Sales Representative
 Sold Cingular Wireless products and services to clientele
 Produced monthly quota and exceeded company sales goals
 Expanded customer base with Business-to-Business presentations
9/03 – 12/05 NTX Wireless Allentown, PA
Sales Manager
 Hired, trained, and supervised new employees
 Suggested new products for stores to carry and implemented them
 Increased profitability in two retail locations over 120%
 Serviced and repaired cellular phones
EDUCATION
1/08 – 6/08 Allstate Career School Lester, PA
 Professional Truck Driver Institute certified (PTDI)
 Commercial Vehicle Training Association (CVTA)
 Accrediting Commission of Career Schools and Colleges of Technology (ACCSCT)
 480 classroom hours, 6 month CDL class A preparatory course
 3.31 current GPA

[Mr.X]

you got a better format?

[paramuscle]

Yeah bro..........try and spice it up a little bit with some language. Don't lie but do remember that there are many ways to tell the truth.



~PM

[Opi]

Originally Posted by Mr.X

you got a better format?

Well the format wont show in a copy paste ya know?

[Mr.X]

Originally Posted by Opi

Well the format wont show in a copy paste ya know?

use the button that says "manage attachments"

[Opi]

Originally Posted by Mr.X

use the button that says "manage attachments"

Elegant Resume.doc:
Your file of 42.0 KB bytes exceeds the forum's limit of 19.5 KB for this filetype.

[Mr.X]

Originally Posted by Opi

Elegant Resume.doc:
Your file of 42.0 KB bytes exceeds the forum's limit of 19.5 KB for this filetype.

decrease size bro

[Opi]

Originally Posted by Mr.X

decrease size bro

I have no idea how to do that to a word document..